Targets for improved DREDD essay -

Since reading through Mr Smith’s comments I have learnt:

-I need to make my introduction shorter and more concise in order to answer the question directly.
-I also need to be more specific and add in figures such as film budgets and box office figures.
-When speaking about star power, I need to link the certain points to Mark Kermode’s thoughts on blockbusters.
-I also need to establish what counts as a successful film and include more details on distribution patterns, 2D vs 3D as well as audience types.
-Finally, I need to mention the Britishness of DREDD.